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简介1.高考英语写作评分标准解析2.历届高考英语作文的范文 要题和答案 越多越好 嘻嘻 只要好的肯定追加100分3.2012年高考英语作文,全国卷4.疯狂英语谈写作文09年高考英语作文题目预测 预测1: 刘翔退赛 在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是腾讯网站的一项调查:运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?选项名称 投票数 百分比 趋势应该退出,健康比

1.高考英语写作评分标准解析

2.历届高考英语作文的范文 要题和答案 越多越好 嘻嘻 只要好的肯定追加100分

3.2012年高考英语作文,全国卷

4.疯狂英语谈写作文

高考英语满分应用文范文大全_高考英语 应用文

09年高考英语作文题目预测

预测1: 刘翔退赛

在2008年北京奥运会上,中国著名运动员刘翔因腿伤退出比赛,引起人们的广泛争议,下面是腾讯网站的一项调查:运动员受伤后,应该坚持还是应该退出?

选项名称 投票数 百分比 趋势

应该退出,健康比金钱重要 222292 34.77% 上升

运动场就是战场,刘翔应该坚持 123752 19.36% 上升

请你结合上表,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法.

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

According to a survey conducted by Tencent Website, about 34% of the people think an athlete should quit the race when injured since health is much more important than a gold medal; While nearly 20% of the netizens believe that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.

In my opinion, it’s a right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit the race. For one thing, nothing is more important than health and sports doesn’t mean sacrificing one’s health for a gold medal; for another, after Liu Xiang recovers fully, he still has many chances to realize his dream.

预测2:北京奥运

经过运动员们16天的激烈拼搏,第29 届奥运会于2008年8月24日在北京落下帷幕.中国运动员发挥出色,获得了51枚金牌,为中国赢得了巨大的荣誉.奥运会期间,有很多值得我们回味的地方.你作为一名中学生—李华,围绕奥运会对人类的影响,谈一下自己的看法,题目自拟.

注意:词数120左右.

What a Great Olympic Games!

The 29th Olympic Games has been over in Beijing, China on August 24,2008, which has left a great impression on the whole world. About 204 countries and regions attended the Olympic Games. In the Games, our Chinese athletes have won 51 gold medals, while America,36; Russia,23. This is the first time that we, Chinese athletes have won so many gold medals in one Olympic Games, which means our sports games belong to the first class in the world!

It is our athletes’ intelligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for us Chinese all! Days when we were looked down upon have gone forever! From the very Games, we have proved that our has the ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully! Not only can we hold the Olympic Games well, but also we can perform well. The fact has showed everything to the world! It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys the saying of those who doubted about it days ago! What a great, successful and impressive Olympic Games!

预测3: 翟志刚首次太空行走

2008年9月25日,中国成功地将三人小组送入太空,其中航天员翟志刚在太空首次行走,这是我国自2003年以来最具有挑战性的太空任务.请简单介绍此次 “神舟七号”的有关情况.内容包括:

1.这是一次具有历史使命的飞行,而且技术上的成果基本都是我国自主研发的.

2.这次的任务主要是太空行走,它将有助于中国在未来几年内建立中国的第一个空间站.

注意:载人飞船manned spaceship/spacecraft; 出舱活动an extra-vehicular activity;空间站space station

Shenzhou-Ⅶ, which was shot up into space on September 25,returned to Earth three days later, having completed its historic mission.

It is the country’s most challenging space mission since 2003.The main mission is to carry out the space walk, known as an extra-vehicular activity, or EVA, which is expected to help China master the technology to create it’s first space station in the next few years. During the traveling, Zhai Zhigang, one of the three astronauts on board Shenzhou-Ⅶ,stepped out of the capsule and conducted the historic space walk. Most importantly, all along China has relied heavily on homegrown technology. The Shenzhou-7 mission marks a historic breakthrough in China’s manned space program. It represents the comprehensive strength of our nation.

预测4:高三备考复习效率

在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间

●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法

●减少作业量以保证质量

●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

预测5:奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题

近几年,奥运会获奖运动员的高薪问题引起了广泛的社会关注。有些人支持这种做法,认为运动员们付出了很多努力,应该得到回报;有些人则持反对意见。请你就此写一篇100词左右的英语短文并发表自己的看法。

In recent years, the topic whether it is fair for athletes to pocket large sums of money has aroused more and more discussion.

Those who support giving sportsmen high salaries think that athletes have won a great reputation for our country in the Olympic Games. What’s more, athletes must undergo painstaking physical and psychological training. Besides, they offer a lot of encouragement to young people to take part in physical activities.

However, some people have different ideas. They consider that athletes do little to boost the national economy directly. Thus they should not receive so much money.

I believe that they should get high salaries, considering all the efforts they have made.

预测6:高考状元与广告

高考过后,总有一些学习用品商家千方百计在高考状元身上下工夫,让状元们说是使用过他们的产品后才取得了优异成绩。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,谈谈自己的看法。内容应包括以下要点:

1. 简要描述这种现象; 2. 给状元们提一点建议。

注意:

1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

2. 参考词汇:状元 Number One Scholar;产品 product;适合suitable

After the college entrance exams, some companies that sell learning products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholars in order to sell their products.

In fact, it’s not easy for students to become Number One Scholars. Most of them succeed not because of the products, but their proper way of learning and hard work. Every student has his own way of studying, so the Number One Scholars’ experience may not be suitable for all the students. Most important of all, not all of these products are good enough to help us study.

I do hope that Number One Scholars can think of the poor students instead of themselves only.

预测6 假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。

1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Robert,

How time flies!

命题方向与写作提示

高考英语书面表达写作素材都是与中学生的日常生活相关的话题,会避免出现考生不熟悉的话题,也不会出现农村或城市学生不熟悉的话题,注重考查考生的语言表达能力。本篇素材考查书信体裁的作文,是应用文的写作,话题涉及社会热点:北京奥运会,内容与中学生的实际生活相关:高考后暑假的安排,体裁是书信体的电子邮件。写作要点包括:1)问候;2)引入话题:高考临近,高考后的安排;3)学开车;4)参加英语培训课程;5)去北京看奥运会;6)游览北京的名胜;7)结束语。

写作提示

书面表达一定要注意要点齐全,写作中要注意适当增加细节以使上下文连贯,并使用一定数量的句式结构。

范文 (One possible version)

Dear Robert:

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.

That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

Best wishes!

预测7 如今世界粮食短缺,价格飞涨,给部分地区造成社会动荡。假设在你校开展的研究性学习中,你们小组以“World Food Crisis”为题进行研究,现在请你代表你们小组向全体同学简要介绍你们的研究成果。主要内容如下:

造成的原因:

1. 气候变化,造成粮食减产

2. 工业发展,城市化加速,耕地减少

3. 世界能源价格上涨,使用粮食生产生物燃料

应对的措施:

1. 注重环保,改善生态

2. 严格保护耕地

3. 富国支持穷国,促进世界和谐

你如何做出自己的贡献

1.……

2.……

注意:1. 内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译

2. 字数150左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数

3. 参考词汇:城市化 urbanization 生物燃料 biofuels

Hello, everyone,

Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas。

命题方向与写作提示

这是一篇提纲式的议论文写作素材,探讨国计民生的社会热点话题:粮食价格上涨。写作时要注意避免逐句翻译,并适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

范文 (One possible version)

Hello, everyone,

Now I’ll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group. As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world food crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Besides, faced with the rising energy prices, people have turned to the production of biofuels, which has worsened the severe situation.

Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. Of course, to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage.

As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.

预测8 下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查,请结合表格内容,用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文,就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。

学习情况 几乎都在学习 半天学习半天活动 几乎都在做其他事情

16% 24% 60%

娱乐休闲 体育活动 游玩和购物 上网看电视

20% 40% 40%

去图书馆 经常 偶尔 几乎没有

5% 23% 72%

课外兴趣小组 经常 偶尔 不参加

10% 20% 70%

范文 (One possible version)

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.

Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.

预测9假如你是李明,你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点:

焦虑症状 建 议

头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

1.考前制定好合适的复习计划

2.考试期间正常作息

3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

参考词汇:头晕—dizzy(adj.)

Dear editor,

I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

范文 (One possible version)

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

预测10 在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间

●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法

●减少作业量以保证质量

●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

范文 (One possible version)

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

预测11 如今,在我们身边,父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童,事构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童,要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些?为了解决留守儿童的问题,请你向当地政府提建议

提示:1.缺乏父母的关爱,性格孤僻,学习压力大、自卑。

2.缺乏安全保障(家庭关心不够,容易犯错误甚至犯罪)。

建议:1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室,老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。

2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。

3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。

4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边,给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。

Dear Mayor,

I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something around us. Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the countryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care.

How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; you can organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. You can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

Best wishes to you!

Sincerely,

LiuHua

预测12 “鸟巢”介绍

假如你是一名导游,请你根据所给的提示,向来北京观光的外国游客介绍2008年北京奥运会主体育场——“鸟巢”。

场馆名称:国家体育场(鸟巢)

建设地点:奥林匹克公园

建筑面积:258,000平方米;长330m;宽220m;高69.2m

座席数:91,000

赛时功能:奥运会开幕式和闭幕布式;田径、足球

赛后功能:体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心

开工时间:2003年12月24日

完工时间:2007年底

评价:中国十大新建筑奇迹之一

注意:

1. 不要逐条翻译;

2.字数:100左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:开幕式和闭幕式 Opening and Closing ceremonies

娱乐活动 entertainment

平方米 square metres

Welcome to Beijing!

That’s all! Thank you!

参考范文

Welcome to Beijing! I’d like to introduce you to the Beijing National Stadium, also known as Bird’s Nest. The stadium is located in Beijing Olympic Park , covering 258,000 square metres. It is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall. The construction began on December 24,2003, and was completed at the end of 2007. The splendid Opening and Closing ceremonies are to take place in Bird’s Nest, which will hold the main track and field events as well as football matches during the games. Afterwards the 91,000-seat stadium will serve as the center of sports events, cultural activities and entertainment. It has been honored as one of the latest wonders buildings in China.

That’s all! Thank you!

高考英语写作评分标准解析

2006安徽卷试题回放

假设你是李华,作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年,寄住在Mr. Brown家里,刚回到国内。回国后,你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家,因此给他写了一封信,请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下:

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的,非常珍贵

词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

邮资自己付

注意:

1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2、可适当增加细节,使行文连贯

3、参考词汇:邮资-postage

Dear Mr. Brown,

I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.

However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

I’m eager to receive your reply.

Yours,

Li hua

[名师点评]

本文作为信件,首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文,那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来,本文在表达作者写作意图的时候,情真意切,用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句,还采用了疑问句,让句式变化而不呆板。

2007安徽卷试题回放

假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。l 简要说明理由。

注意:  1. 词数100左右。   2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。  

3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。  4. 参考栏目:栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

名师点评

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度,不可谓不让人佩服。

2011高考英语满分作文赏析

作文题目

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:

1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以 ‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作文:

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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高考英语写作评分标准解析

  英语应用文写作评分标准篇一:高考英语写作评分标准

 写作是英语词汇、语法和使用英语诸方面能力的真实反应。高考中的'书面表达是一种有控制的写作(controlledincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseyourroommatealwayshasfriendsvisiting.He/Shehaspartiesintheroomandsometimesborrowsyourthingswithoutaskingyou.

 WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeratthecollegeand:1)askforanewroomnextterm,2)youwouldpreferasingleroom,3)explainyourreasons.

 Don’tsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,using“LiMing”instead.

 DearSirorMadam,

 Iamwritingtoexpress/airdissatisfaction/disappointment/concernregardingaccommodation.Iwouldprefertomoveintoasingleroomnextsemester,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.

 Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Tosolvethisdifficulty/surmountthisdifficulty/improvethissituation/crackthishardnut,Ihopetodrawtheattentionoftheauthoritiesconcerned.Iamsureyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionformeistomoveintoaroomofmyown.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.

 Yourssincerely,

 LiMing(136words)

 (128words)

 Directions:

 Youwanttoapplyforthefollowingpost/position:Waiter/waitressrequiredforeveningwork.Writealetter:

 1)showyourinterest,

 2)describeyourpreviousexperience,

 3)explainwhyyouwouldbesuitableforthejob.

 Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,using“LiMing”instead.

 DearSirorMadam,

 Iamwritingtoexpressmyinterestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionforawaitress.Enclosedwiththisletterismyresume,whichfurtherdetailsmypreviousworkexperienceandqualifications.

 Notonlydomyqualificationsandworkexperiencemakemeaperfectcandidateforthejob,mypersonalityiswellsuitedtoworkingasawaitress.Iamaveryfriendlypersonwhocanquicklyestablishrapportwithpeopleofallages.

 Iwouldliketomeetwithyouatyourearliestconvenience,todiscussthepossibilityofworkingatyourrestaurant.Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplication.Ilookforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.

 Yourssincerely,

 LiMing(119words)

 Directions:

 Youhaveafriendwhoisabouttoenteruniversity,andhewantsyoutoadvisehimonwhichsubjecttospecializein—history,inwhichheisveryinterested,orcomputerscience,whichoffersbetterjobprospects.1)Giveyoursuggestions.2)Explainthereasons.3)Otherrecommendation.

 DearWangcai,

 Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceconcerning/regardingwhetheryoushouldstudyhistoryorcomputerscienceatuniversity,andIwilltrytomakesomeuseful/practical/conducivesuggestions/proposals/recommendations.

 Youmustkeepinmindthat,aboveall,youruniversitytrainingisapreparationforyourfuturecareer.Thereisnodoubtthatthefieldofcomputerscienceoffersfarwiderjobopportunitiesthanhistory.Besides,fortheforeseeablefuture,notonlywillitbenecessaryforeveryonetobecomputer-literate,itwillalsobenecessarytobeequippedwithcomputerskillsmerelytoearnaliving.

 Ofcourse,Iwouldrecommendthatyoukeepupyourreadingofhistoryinyoursparetime.

 Yourssincerely,

 LiMing(111words)

 Directions:

 Youfindyourstudyloadistooheavy.Writealettertoyourcollegeteacher:1)youneedtowithdrawfromtwocourses,2)explainthereasons,

 3)askifitispossibletoobtainarefund.

 DearProfessorShakespeare,

 Iamwritingtoformallyrequesttowithdrawfromtwocourses:IntroductiontoElementaryEducationandTeachingMethods.

 ThemainreasonforreducingmycourseloadisthatIamfindingitextremelydifficulttomanagesixcourses.BecauseIreallyhavetoworkparttime,Ihavenootherchoicebuttodecreasemycourseload.

 Iwouldalsoliketorequestatuitionrefund.IamsorryforanyinconveniencesIhavecausedbythischangeinplans.Thisdecisionwasnottakenlightly,andIdoappreciatethekindconsiderationyouhaveshowntome.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeat82036600.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

 Yourssincerely,

 LiMing(134words)

 Directions:

 Youwanttoinvitesomefriendstoaparty.Writeaninvitationlettertothemindividually:1)Invitethemtotheparty.

 2)Elaborateonthereasonwhysuchapartyshouldbeheld.3)Whatactivitieswillbearrangedforthem.

 DearXiaobao,

 IwillholdadinnerpartyatmyhouseonApril1,2006tocelebrateMr.OldFish’smarriagewithMissFujiwora.Asyouareaclosefriendofus,wewouldverymuchlikeyoutoparticipateinthecelebrationandshareourjoy.

 Theoccasionwillstartatseveno’clockintheevening,withtheshowingoftheirweddingceremony.Thiswillbefollowedbyadinnerparty.Ataroundten,wewillholdasmallmusicalsoiree,atwhichabandwillperformsomeworksbyBachandStrauss.

 IfyoudonothaveanypriorappointmentonApril1,welookforwardtothepleasureofyourcompany.

 Yourssincerely,

 LiMing(118words)

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疯狂英语谈写作文

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、 自我介绍;

2、 祝贺苏琳生日;

3、 感谢工作人员;

4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;

2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3、开头语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

__________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

写作要点

1. 自我介绍

2. 信息来源

3. 祝贺生日

4. 感谢照顾

5. 索取照片

6. 合适的结尾

参考范文

One Possible Version

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Greetings from Chian!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be there. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

易错提醒有的考生可能会不认真审题而漏掉要点:信息的来源以及合适的结尾。文章书信开头有了,但是结尾没有给出,有时候是给出结尾的。因此要注意审题,提炼要点。

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1、确定文章体裁、格式、结构及常用时态。书信以应用文形式出现,时态以一般现在时或一般将来时为主。

2、依据题目列出内容要点、分清文章层次。只写与要求一致的内容,文章层次应结合问题特点来安排。在确定内容时,应使用自己最熟悉的英语词汇或句型来表述。

1. 《疯狂的英语》作文怎么写

reading makes me crazy!

i'm a bookworm.of the i love reading so much that i read for several hours everyday.among so many books ,i like essays and novels best.because i can learn a lot of good words and sentences that can make me write better.what's more,the plots and the figures attact me a lot.reading benifits me a lot,open my mind and makes me *** arter.reading books in the library is a nice choice for books there are free and people can choose whatever books they like,so i go to the library often.

2. 李阳疯狂英语13篇作文

1.I love you not because of who you are , but because of who I am when I am with you.No man or woman is worth you tears , and the one who is won't make you cryThe worst way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside them konwing you can't have them .Never frown even when you are sad, because you never know who is falling in love with you *** ile.To the wrold you may be you one person ,but to one person you may be the wrold .Don't waste you time on a man/woman ,who isn't willing to waste their time on you .Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all the have .Don't try to hard ,the best things e when you are least except them to.May be God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one,so that when we finally meet the person, we will know how to be grateful.Don't cry because it is over, *** ile because it happened. -----by Thomas Browne。

3. 李阳疯狂英语13篇作文

1.I love you not because of who you are , but because of who I am when I am with you.

No man or woman is worth you tears , and the one who is won't make you cry

The worst way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside them konwing you can't have them .

Never frown even when you are sad, because you never know who is falling in love with you *** ile.

To the wrold you may be you one person ,but to one person you may be the wrold .

Don't waste you time on a man/woman ,who isn't willing to waste their time on you .

Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all the have .

Don't try to hard ,the best things e when you are least except them to.

May be God wants us to meet a few wrong people before meeting the right one,so that when we finally meet the person, we will know how to be grateful.

Don't cry because it is over, *** ile because it happened.

-----by Thomas Browne

4. 疯狂英语演讲稿

sooooo easy~

Self-confidence refers to the firm belief in one's capability to do something well. In many cases,self-confidence is crucial to one's success.

Self-confidence is an inportant psychological factor in our work. We can safely draw the conclusion that being given the same kind of work,a self-confidence person will find the work much easier and more interesting than one that holds a gloomy view on one's own ability. Similarly,when facing a patient, the doctor who is quite confident of his diagnosis is more likely to give much fort to the patient and therefore achieves more satisfying result than a doctor who isn't because the self-confidence of a doctor greatly influences his patient's mood.

Self-confidence is forever a help, a stimulus to one's success! As a self-confident people, it's a piece of cake to reach frenziedly. In other words , frenzied is an excitant , is a excitant to get success. We need frenzied , and we must frenzied! (frenzied 也可换作 crazy,但crazy有一定贬义,书面frenzied更好些,自己定夺)

自信是指一个儿女有做好某件事的坚定信念。在许多事例中,自信对一个人的成功至关重要。

自信在我们的工作中是一种很重要的心理因素。我们能很容易地得出这样的结论:同样的工作,充满自信的人会比对自身能力持怀疑态度的人觉得更容易、更有趣。同样,在面对一个病人时,一个胸有成竹的医生会给病人带来莫大的安慰,并会比一个没有信心的医生带给更加令人满意的疗效,毕竟医生的自信大大影响着病人的情绪。

自信是对成功的一种永久性帮助和鼓励!对于一个自信的人来说,疯狂触手可及。可以说,疯狂是兴奋剂,是成功的兴奋剂。我们需要疯狂,我们必须疯狂!

5. 疯狂英语演讲稿

In the matter of courage we all have our limits. There never was a hero who did not have his bounds. I suppose it may be said of Nelson and all the others whose courage has been advertised that there came times in their lives when their bravery knew it had e to its limit.

I have found mine a good many times. Sometimes this was expected--often it was unexpected. I know a man who is not afraid to sleep with a rattle-snake, but you could not get him to sleep with a safety-razor.

I never had the courage to talk across a long, narrow room. I should be at the end of the room facing all the audience. If I attempt to talk across a room I find myself turning this way and that, and thus at alternate periods I have part of the audience behind me. You ought never to have any part of the audience behind you; you never can tell what they are going to do.

I'll sit down.

中文:

在勇气问题上,人人都有极限。从来就没有胆大包天的英雄好汉。我想,可以说,纳尔逊和所有那些被大量宣传的勇士,一生中都有勇气达到极限的时候。

我就多次发现自己的勇气到了极限。有时是意料之中的——经常是出乎意料的。我认识一个人.此君不怕与响尾蛇同寝,可你无法让他与保安剃刀共眠。

我从来就没有勇气在狭长房间的中央发表讲话。我得站在房间的一头,面对全体听众。如果我试图站在房间中央讲话,我就会不断地转身,这样,就不断有部分听众在我背后。你们永远不能让自己背后有听众;你们永远闹不清他们要干什么。

我得坐下了。

6. 李阳疯狂英语演讲观后感300字

周五阳阳回家的时候,兴奋地告诉我们他得到了一张李阳疯狂英语演讲的票,周六晚上七点半开始。

我说你要游泳的嘛。他说可以改一下,周五晚上游。

看到他那么想去,而且票还是好不容易得来的(只发给中期考试的前两名,阳阳是第三名,但第一名思思不想去,就发给他了)我就同意了。仔细一看,还是亲子票,不用考虑谁去谁不去的问题了。

票上写的是提前半小时入场。下午六点半就催着对动画片恋恋不舍的阳阳出门,我们一起步行去新南路上的空军礼堂。

走进礼堂附近,就看到路边停了很多汽车,凭票走进礼堂后,哇塞,吓一跳,礼堂里已黑压压地坐满了人,只有最后三排没坐满了。赶紧招呼阳阳找了倒数第三排靠中间的位置坐下。

外面还在不断涌进一拨一拨的家长和孩子。很快,后面三排也坐满了,还在不断进人,工作人员搬了很多塑料板凳放在舞台中间,一声令下,舞台中间的板凳全被占领了。

过道上还是站满了前来听演讲的家长和孩子们。据说外面还有很多来晚了进不了场的家长和孩子,而且还发生了一点小事故。

我们庆幸幸好我们来得早了一步,要不就惨了。具有震撼力的音乐和全场红色的标语使这里变成了疯狂英语的现场。

李阳开始演讲了。他说,成功的秘诀在于你做你不喜欢的事。

天才就是不断的重复。不要问你的祖国为你做了什么,要问你为你的祖国做了什么。

领导全场观众跟读也是他的特色之一。他还教孩子们感恩,告诉家长你的孩子是神。

如果老师批评了你的孩子,你不要直接批评你的孩子,因为你的孩子是神,人怎能批评神呢?看到这里,各位看官自有判断,我就不阐述个人观点了。原定两小时的演讲不得不因为外面混乱的秩序而提前一个小时草草收场。

后面是李阳疯狂英语夏令营的促销,原价4980,现直降1000,还送一抹多东西。儿子有点动心,我告诉他不着急,还有五天时间报名。

回家后,经过耐心的劝导解释工作,儿子对李阳的疯狂英语有了更全面的认识,也不闹着要参加夏令营了。但是,他树立了要学好英语的决心,这一点让我很高兴。

所以,感谢李阳给成都的孩子和家长们上了一场生动的教育课。

7. 对游戏疯狂英语作文

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Inter

The following aspects could best illustrate the advantages of Inter. Netsurfers (网上冲浪者) in different countries can share interesting knowledge and the latest information. Besides, Inter has provided a major opportunity to buy and sell merchandise (商品). What is more, people may get medical help or even vote on Inter. Its advantages seem countless.

Behind all this glowing talk, however, are some problems. Inter makes people passive by stopping them making their own entertainment. So much so that when there is a breakdown or jam, people may find that World Wide Web turns into World Wide Wait. What is worse, some children have access to the scenes of violence and sex. Apart from these, it can be affected by viruses(病毒) and hackers (黑客).

We should handle its problems, meanwhile we should exploit its potential as well. With proper management of Inter people ought to experience more fruits of the information revolution. All the wisdom of the ages, all the information that has enlightened mankind for centuries, should be available to us with the healthy development of Inter.

8. 以《听李阳疯狂英语后》的感受写个作文

今天下午天气晴朗,烈日炎炎。

我校迎来了疯狂英语的创始人,李阳老师!虽然天气炎热,但是师生们的热情更热。开场李阳老师就以风趣幽默的语言活跃了操场上的气氛,激发了同学们的兴趣,在接下来的时间里,李阳老师并没有长篇大论的讲诉他作为老师的观点,而是贴近我们学生,站在我们学生的角度出发去讲述如何看待英语的,并从他自己的经历中总结出许多宝贵的经验来教导我们,并鼓励许多成绩不好的同学,告诉他们‘‘英语就是汉语下的蛋。

’',‘‘英语就是一门弱智的语言。我们是在可怜美国人学不会汉语。

所以我们要把英语学会学好。’'这些话让我们捧腹大笑的同时,也让我们找回了学英语的自信。

李阳老师让我们在操场上大声朗读,用身体来解析英语的语法,改善了我们传统学习英语的方法。最后李阳老师亲自指导我们退场,并亲切的告诉我们注意安全,这个下午过得非常有意义,这个下午将对我们的学习之路、人生之路产生重要的影响。

9. 疯狂英语易背作文128篇高中版文本谁有疯狂英语易背作文128篇高 爱

书名:疯狂英语易背作文128篇:高中版(书+4CD)特价 图书编号:2114362 出版社:中山大学 定价:28。

0 ISBN:788490087 作者:李建平 出版日期:2003-09-01 版次: 开本: 简介: 疯狂英语易背作文使你摆脱蹩脚英文写作,摆脱死记硬背语法的痛苦,摆脱想说英语口难开的尴尬;内容贴近日常生活,绝对管用,行文流畅,用词考究,绝对地道,选材广泛,议论文,应用文,说明文一网打尽! 本书是严格按照《国家教委考试大纲》所规定的书面表达部分的要求和近十年考试试题而精心挑选和编写的。 全书由论说文、记叙文、应用文、说明文四大部分组成。

每篇范文也包括四部分:范文、注释、点评和文章的中文译文。范文选择的原则是“广、全、多”,尽可能使考生熟悉各类题目和各种文体,解决考生面对考题无从下手的问题。

注释主要是列举重要的句型、短语和生词。 点评是本书的特色之一,读者可以从注释里了解每篇文章的写作特点,吸取其精华。

最后附有中文译文,使考生可以在阅读和背诵英语范文的同时,参考中文译文,从而进一步理解和记忆范文。 目录: 第一部分:议论文 1。

我们为什么上大家? 2。论电视 3。

金钱能买到幸福吗? 4。失败是成功之母? 5。

自然资源 6。论考试 7。

论作业 8。工作与休息 9。

诚实过时了吗? 10。我对禁放鞭炮的看法 11。

广告的缺点 12。代沟 13。

论科学和人类生活 14。“幸运数字”真能带来好运吗? 15。

**让位于电视 16。去边远地区的学生 17。

我国国民婚姻状况 18。我对传统的看法 19。

论快餐 20。论书籍 21。

当今女性 22。竞争与合作 23。

理论与实践 24。论勤奋 25。

城市与乡村 26。 *** 工作 27。

不要溺爱孩子 28。参加校园活动 29。

早期教育 30。他们为什么辍? …… 第二部分:记叙文 第三部分:应用文 第四部分:说明文 购买地址 。

10. 李阳疯狂英语高考作文13篇

成功之路第一篇:暑假打工 Summer Holiday Part-time Job 成功之路第二篇:广告与现代生活 Advertisements in Our Life 成功之路第三篇:口头通知——欢迎美国代表团 American Student's Visit 成功之路第四篇:写好英语作文的秘密 Secrets to Write a Beautiful Article 成功之路第五篇:经典求职信 Job Hunting 成功之路第六篇:学生是否应该参加体育锻炼 Whether Students should Take Physical Exercise 成功之路第七篇:因特网的作用 On the Inter 成功之路第八篇:经典图表描述 The Red Star Television Factory 成功之路第九篇:农村儿童失学问题 Rural Education 成功之路第十篇:网络学校 New Century Net-school 成功之路第十一篇:北京奥运 Beijing Olympic Games 成功之路第十二篇:学生是否有必要带手机去学校 Mobile Phones at School 李阳老师特别奉献:英语是我最喜欢的科目 English Is My Favorite Subject 成功之路第五篇:工作求职 文体:求职信 题目要求 下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一则招聘广告: Office secretary, with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC (personal puter). Address, age, health condition Write to A518, Charlie Office 假设你是李华,现年20岁,身体健康,学习英语6年,学过广告中所列项目。

通信地址是北京市745信箱(P.O. Box 745)。 请根据广告中提出的招聘职务,应聘条件和你自己的简要情况,写一封自荐信。

字数:100词左右。(通信时间,地址可不列出) 李阳疯狂英语经典范文 Job Hunting Dear Sir or Madame: [1] I have read your advertisement in yesterday's China Daily. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your pany. I'm 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I have studied English for six years. I studied bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I am good at both operating a PC and English. I can read, write, listen to and speak English. I'm interested in the position of a secretary. [2] I want very much to be accepted by your pany. I'll work hard if I can be a member in your pany. Li Hua 成功之路第六篇:学生是否应该参加体育锻炼 文体:议论文 题目要求 假如你叫李华,你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论。

讨论主题是:高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼? 请你根据下表提供的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况。介绍讨论情况。

55%的学生认为 1.应该每天进行体育锻炼。 2.可以做早操、大乒乓球、打篮球,但时间不要过长。

3.锻炼能增加体体质,减少疾病 4.运动使大脑休息,使复习效果更好。 45%的学生认为 1.体育浪费时间。

2.锻炼使人疲劳。 3.运动以后很兴奋,较长时间不能复习功课。

4.运动中可能会受伤。 注意: 1.词数100字左右。

李阳疯狂英语经典范文 Whether Students should Take Physical Exercise Dear editor, [1] I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise. 55% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and basketball, but it shouldn't take up too much time. Proper exercise can build up one's body and reduce diseases. What's more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively. [2] On the other hand, 45% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it is tiring. After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. It's also possible get hurt in sports. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 成功之路第七篇:因特网的作用 文体:说明文 题目要求 在日常生活中,因特网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报纸写一篇题为On the Inter的征文稿。

因特网的主要用途 信息……看国内外新闻、获取其他信息 通讯……发e-mail、打电话 学习……上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学英语 娱乐……欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩游戏 生活…… 购物、聊天等 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.标题已经给出,不计入总词数。 李阳疯狂英语经典范文 On the Inter [1] The Inter is playing a more and more important role in our daily life. On the Inter, we can read news both at home and abroad and learn about all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, take classes, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves, enjoy music, watch sports, play chess, cards and so on. Besides, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them on the Inter. [2] In a word, the Inter has made our life richer and more colorful. 成功之路第八篇:经典图表描述 文体:说明文 题目要求 有一批外宾将来红星电视机厂参观,请根据下表所提供的信息,用英语为该厂写一篇简单介绍。

年代………………人数 ……人员………………设。